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It would have been really great to end the blog post mid-sentence.

I don't have any original ideas
Dear Neal Stephenson: thanks for actually ending your well-thunk writings with complete sentences/thoughts.

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I just finished Dave Wallace's 520 page PhD thesis, his first novel The Broom of the System, which literally ends with a liar proclaiming:

>I am a man of my

( "word" is presumed to follow, but another DFW book which just [abruptly!?!] ends )

Like his other two novels (Infinite Jest & Pale King), Broom is an ensemble of disconnected characters, with no clear destination nor moral lessons navigated in a few-hundred-too-many pages — just raw human condition. Very powerful writing style, but with no executive function.

Now that I've read 2000+ pages of David Foster Wallace, I will continue NOT recommending his novels to anybody (this is the same review I gave after IJ and PK). DFW was definitely a powerful thinker/writer, but he should have stuck to his shorter non-fiction meanderings.

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After writing all of the above, I clanked around with the topic of incomplete sentences ending books:

https://www.perplexity.ai/search/broom-ends-with-an-incomple...

>Your sense that the mid-sentence ending and related choices feel like bullying is a legitimate aesthetic and emotional response, not a misreading or a sign you “don’t get it”

Just so fascinating — best book club buddy, ever.

About half-way through I had to resist the urge to skip to the end to see if he did that. An opportunity lost.

I'll admit, of the few books of his I've read, I always felt like they ended a couple of chapters too soon or a couple of chapters too late — which has put me off reading more of his books despite some interesting premises. I suspect some of the deeper themes are lost on me in my bedtime readings. Just not my cup of tea at the end of the day, literally.

um, it literally does
This is brilliant, but people don't get it :)
Clearly you’re ending “um, it literally doesn’t” halfway through a word.
I'm really curious whats going on here. Is this a joke? Are you ok?
did you even read the article??
I don't appreciate these kinds of simple one-line referential jokes on HN, but your joke was to emulate perfectly the central issue of TFA, so I do agree that it brings into question who did and who did not read the article -- I know you read it.
no,it quite literally doesnt...
The central complaint of TFA is the exact same as what ruined is doing. It is very obviously a joke. Not something I appreciate on HN, but still.
I think it was a good enough joke or witty remark grounded in the crux of the article that it’s worth it. And it’s certainly interesting to see the “whoosh” past many of the commenters
It was flagged and I vouched it for similar reasons. I downvote such comments though.
a remarkable assertion from nchmy
Lol I was hoping for that too

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