Everything you said sounds great, other than the fact the first half of it is generic surveillance dystopia. I had hoped we’d be a more unique dystopia, but it appears we’ll have to settle for run of the mill.

How it all started:

“Bookmarks and shit don’t cut it anymore”.

Tsk tsk.

I’ll just leave this here:

https://youtu.be/kGYwdVt3rhI